The first tea bag it was filled with flame but it didn't spread through out the class room, it just stayed in the same sport that was placed. Once our teacher started to light the tea bag it had finished flaming and started to go up in the air like it was some kind of an Hot air balloon. The second tea bag was the exact same thing with the 1st tea bag. The air was inside of the tea bag and it had started to float in the air like a hot air balloon. It got hot so it had more energy to fly up.
This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
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Wednesday, 5 December 2018
FIRE!!! Experiment In Room 4
This morning we have to write a blog post about what had just happen in class, and how it felt when it had happen? So for more information we were sitting down in class on mat facing the front, and our teacher Mrs Stone and a student Terry were setting up, they placed two kind of the same tea bags, but laid it standing up, two were up the front and our teacher started to use the lighter and light up the tea bags that were up the front, some people were kind of scared that they moved at the back of the class so they wouldn't want to get burned.
The first tea bag it was filled with flame but it didn't spread through out the class room, it just stayed in the same sport that was placed. Once our teacher started to light the tea bag it had finished flaming and started to go up in the air like it was some kind of an Hot air balloon. The second tea bag was the exact same thing with the 1st tea bag. The air was inside of the tea bag and it had started to float in the air like a hot air balloon. It got hot so it had more energy to fly up.
The first tea bag it was filled with flame but it didn't spread through out the class room, it just stayed in the same sport that was placed. Once our teacher started to light the tea bag it had finished flaming and started to go up in the air like it was some kind of an Hot air balloon. The second tea bag was the exact same thing with the 1st tea bag. The air was inside of the tea bag and it had started to float in the air like a hot air balloon. It got hot so it had more energy to fly up.
Friday, 24 August 2018
Hip Hop Line Dancing Style
This term our topic for this year is called Move Ya' Body. It is involving movements in our topic. Today our teacher Mr Wiseman say to us that we have options to choose what kind of features of movements we could have likely do. Likely because this term it is involving our topic ( Move ya' Body ).While we have been going on we got put into our home class to likely do some inquiry learning as a group all together. In home class I have partnered up with my friend Gwynn, me and her decided to think about what we are going to do to perform in front of our other class mates to showcase.
A few hours I came up with and idea to be involving our topic for this term, I told my friend and that we were going to be learning something that we have never done before. So I told her that we were going to be doing a dance. A dance that was decided from me and that me and her agreed with, our dance was actually going to work. Our dance we are going to do is a dance we decided was Hip Hop Line Dancing. So then we started adding some songs, there were mostly the top five songs that we were likely going to dance to in front of our class mates.
So hopefully we are going to get great at this and we are likely hoping that we don't mess up our dance to perform for our classmates. Fingers cross!!!
Wednesday, 22 August 2018
Delicious Descriptions
This term I have have just finished my writing activity for week 1, term 3. This term we have been learning about essay writing and how to improve our writing to make it more sense and better writing. Here is a presentation about my writing of how I can improve on to make my writing more perfect. Hope you enjoy my writing activity for 2018. Enjoy!!!
Monday, 7 May 2018
100 Words
Sunshine threw the curtains came onto my eyes, I sternly got out of bed and went into the kitchen got out cereal and sugar ready ( Don't forget my spoon and bowl ). Then onwards I walked to the fridge with my eyes closed half way through open the fridge door and reach for the milk but suddenly there were no milk at all. I opened my eyes and shouted loudly ' Where's all the MILK '. My parents woke up with a fright got out of bed and ran down to the kitchen to see what was that loud shouting coming from. My parents had said ' Why were you shouting about ' said both of them, ' All the milk is gone and I can't have breakfast without milk ' I had said frowning. My parents had said just go for a walk to the shops to by more.
I got change, put my shoes on and went for a quick walk down to the shops. I crossed the the crossing and could hear someone who had shouted ' Help help ', I currently looked back and it was a random person running from a dog. He had shouted loudly again ' Help Help ' said again the voice from the same random person. The End
WALT - Write 100 words
This term I have finished my writing activity for 2018, my writing activity is about a person who is described like me but may have some troubling with myself but everybody needs milk am I right. Hope that you enjoy my writing work for 2018. Enjoy!!
WALT - Write 100 words
This term I have finished my writing activity for 2018, my writing activity is about a person who is described like me but may have some troubling with myself but everybody needs milk am I right. Hope that you enjoy my writing work for 2018. Enjoy!!
Thursday, 10 August 2017
Writing - I have a Dream
I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.
Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.
But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we’ve come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.
In a sense we’ve come to our nation’s capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the “ unalienable Rights ” of “ Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness. “ It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come marked “ insufficient funds. ”
But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we’ve come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.
We have also come to this hallowed sport to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all God’s children.
It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro’s legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality. Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow of steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual. And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day justice emerges.
But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred. We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.
The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny. And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.
We cannot walk alone.
And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead.
We cannot turn back.
There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, “ When will you be satisfied? ” We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. *We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro’s basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their selfhood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: “For Whites Only.”* We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until “justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream.”¹
I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest - - quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.
Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.
And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal.”
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of “interposition” and “nullification”-- one day right there Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; “and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together.”2
This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the south with.
With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.
And this will be the day -- this will be the day when all of God’s children will be able to sing with new meaning:
My country ‘tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing.
Land where my fathers died, land of the Pilgrim’s pride,
From every mountainside, let freedom ring!
And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true.
And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.
Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.
Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.
Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.
Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.
But not only that:
Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.
Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.
Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.
From every mountainside, let freedom ring.
And when this happens, and when we allow freedom ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God’s children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual:
Free at last! Free at Last!
Thank God Almighty, we are free at last3
Monday, 1 May 2017
My Holidays Recount
During the school holidays I went to a beautiful Island called Niue. Why I went there? Because I went to see my Auntie and Uncle. I stayed for one week. On the 3rd day, Wednesday. I went to the beach and sat down. Just then my Auntie came to check on me because she notice that I was gone. One hour later, I went to go for a swim, but I got so hot that I just went under the trees. Later that my Auntie called me to come for dinner so I did.


After dinner I ate dinner and then went to sleep, during my sleep half of me felted cold because of the cold breeze at night. Just then it was morning and I woke up, when I woke up my Mum and Dad came and picked me up to go back to New Zealand in Auckland. Just then I said Bye and went with my Mum and Dad back home.
Finally I came back to my real home and sat on my bed when my Mum went to ask me to have lunch I was fast asleep.The best thing about my holidays was going to Niue and seeing my Auntie and Uncle. And I can't wait till the next holidays so I can see my Auntie and Uncle back at Niue.
Friday, 10 March 2017
Simple Sentences
WALT - Identify and write simple and compound sentences
Today I have just finished my writing this week.What I learnt was that we had to do a writing doc of Simple sentences.
Friday, 24 February 2017
Why people need to drink water
Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
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Title
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Why People Need to Drink Water
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Introduction
| The reason why we need to drink water is because it will keep us alive. Water is also Healthy. |
Information
1st element
| Water can keep us healthy and strong. Did you know that 80% of our body is made out of water. |
Information
2nd element
| If you don't drink water you could die from dehydration. If we drink water we will learn from our teachers. |
Information
3rd element
| Did you know that a person can live about a month without food. And only about a week without water as well. |
Conclusion
| When people drink water it helps so that you don't sweat a lot. When you run around outside don't forget to drink heaps of water. |
WALT - Plan for a piece of explanation writing.
- Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TTIC) structure.
Today I have just finished my writing this week.What I learnt from my teacher is that it is important to drink water because you can die from dehydration.And you also need water that if you run around outside it is important as well to drink lots of water when is hot and sunny outside.So when it is hot on a sunny day don't forget to drink lots of water.
Tuesday, 6 December 2016
A wild adventure
On a great afternoon there were two boys and their names were Kent and Zac. Kent asked if he could go for an adventure near a cave called Tanuki cave.
Later that afternoon Kent asked his mum that if he could go for an adventure with his friend Zac. So Kent’s mum said “ Why don’t you go and tell Zacs mum that if he is allowed to come with” “Okey” said Kent. So he went to Zac's house.
Later that Kent asked Zac’s mum if Zac was allowed to come with him for an adventure to Tanuki cave. Then Zac came down and said “ Mum do you know where I put my shoes” but she did not answer she was too busy talking to Kent.
Then Kent asked Zac if he wanted to come Tanuki cave with him. Zac said “YES”.Then Kent went back home to go pack and Zac went upstairs to pack as well.When Kent got back home his mum already did his packing for him.
Later that hour Zac just finished and said “Buy to his mum” so he went to Kent’s mum’s car and went at the back with him.When they got their was in front of the cave inside it looked slimy so Kent’s mum said “Have a good day and see you later”.
So where should we start the fire over their said Kent. But then they heard a noise a loud they said that it was a slim monster in there.So they got the torch and aimed it to the cave what they saw was bones and heaps and heaps of slime.
The next day Kent was the only one sleeping on the ground because Zac went into the cave to check it out when he took one step Kent his hand and Zac and Kent fell over.
Walt: write a narrative
Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing (for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling).
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Thursday, 17 November 2016
YAH!! We are back to school
YAH!! We are back to school,and it just turned to term 4.I am excited because we get to learn and go on Chromebooks and do some work.What I really like about school is learning,writing,reading and also maths which is my favourite of course.While I am at school I like to do my work.I am excited and I can't wait for my next day of school tomorrow.
WALT: We have just cam back to school after the school holidays
WALT: We have just cam back to school after the school holidays
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YAH!! We are back to school
YAH!! We are back to school,and it just turned to term 4.I am excited because we get to learn and go on Chromebooks and do some work.What I really like about school is learning,writing,reading and also maths which is my favourite of course.While I am at school I like to do my work.I am excited and I can't wait for my next day of school tomorrow.
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Wednesday, 19 October 2016
Behind the door
In a lifetime ago, on a bright sunny day there were two twins and their names were, Nick and Rose.They were normal teenagers who goes to High school.
The next lovely morning Nick and Rose were getting ready for their first day of school, when they got ready they had breakfast. Then there bus was here ready to take them to school.
When Nick and Rose said bye to there mum and dad they hopped on the bus and sat at the back, because there were mean people there ready for their first day of school too. So they sat at the back were the other chairs were left and then they sat down looking all around but not at them.
Then they got off the bus and went to class, later that hour they finished school at went back on the bus this time they were the first one on the bus and sat on the front seat. And other people came and the last people came and sat at the back just like the twins.
Later that two hours the bus driver stopped at Nick’s and Rose’s house. So Nick and Rose hopped off the bus and they realized that there house was different because to them it looked like a cave door to them. So they opened it and behind it was a big fire breathing dragon inside a cave which the twins did not know.
Later or sooner the twins were terrified and scared by seeing the enormous fire breathing dragon at there house of where they lived.
Tuesday, 9 August 2016
Olympic 2016
Have you ever dream about going to the Olympics? Well did you know when the Olympics start well the Olympics started in 1896 they started to add more Olympics sport to the Olympics so there was swimming track race and more.If you want to always be come a track race runner well to be a track runner is to practice and practice to get better and better then you can time yourself at running.
Now have you want to be in the Olympics or an athlete it takes time to practice and get ready for the Olympics.And have you ever want to practice with you Olympics buddy it takes time to have a Olympic buddy to help you get ready when your times comes to going to the Olympics and vsing the teams.
Do you say to yourself when it come to winning and then it comes to losing well winning means like you feel so amazing inside of you that you are happy and you won and your family is so proud of you that you won.Then when it come to losing that just means that you tried and your family is still proud of you that you tried your best in the Olympics.
Have you ever ever ever Celebration in the Olympics like if people come 1st, 2nd or 3nd and they go all crazy and saying to there self that there so proud that they came 1st,2nd or 3nd and they go home and say they came 1st,2nd or 3nd place.
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