Wednesday 4 November 2015

Train



On Wednesday I was going on a trip to America then I sawed the driver he was blind he did not know which button to push then the train was going to fall.Then after a while the train fall and I jumped off I was holding on to the rail then got up then the rails came a part I fall off and died.



THE END

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  2. Hi Jasmyne this was a great story that you did but you need to do some more work on like add some more words. And your story made me happy when i read it and i saw that you need some more work on it from Tatiana keep up the good work.

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  3. Thanks Tatiana for your comment I really enjoy your comment thanks tatiana.

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