Friday, 24 February 2017

Why people need to drink water

Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Title - What you will be explaining
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Why People Need to Drink Water
The reason why we need to drink water is because it will keep us alive.
Water is also Healthy.
1st element
Water can keep us healthy and strong.
Did you know that 80% of our body is made out of water.
2nd element
If you don't drink water you could die from dehydration.
If we drink water we will learn from our teachers.
3rd element
Did you know that a person can live about a month without food.
And only about a week without water as well.
When people drink water it helps so that you don't sweat a lot.
When you run around outside don't forget to drink heaps of water.
WALT - Plan for a piece of explanation writing.
- Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TTIC) structure.

Today I have just finished my writing this week.What I learnt from my teacher is that it is important to drink water because you can die from dehydration.And you also need water that if you run around outside it is important as well to drink lots of water when is hot and sunny outside.So when it is hot on a sunny day don't forget to drink lots of water.


  1. Hi Jasmyne

    It me Hazel your sister. I really like your Why people need to drink water.

    Bye jasmyne i like it

    By hazel

    1. Thank you Hazel
      I really like how you said you liked my Why people need to drink water.
      From Jasmyne

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  3. hello jasmyne from Pt England school. Your writing is surprisingly good. You might wanna add a few more things about why we need to drink water. like: "did you know %80 of our body is made out of water" Or "If you don't drink water you could dye from dehydration" best of luck to you in the coming future

    1. Hi Mayjah from Glen Innes School. Your comment was so helpful.
      Thank you for your help.
      From Jasmyne