Thursday, 7 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

 “Go!”, yelled dad. He was yelling at the tv while watching the boxing during the Commonwealth games. He was watching very intensely. David Nyika looked strong BOOM his opponent was knocked to the ground. “Hooray!” we all shouted. David won gold and he is a champion. Wow i thought i want to be a boxer when i grow up.

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