Tuesday, 6 December 2016

A wild adventure

On a great afternoon there were two boys and their names were Kent and Zac. Kent asked if he could go for an adventure near a cave called Tanuki cave.

Later that afternoon Kent asked his mum that if he could go for an adventure with his friend Zac. So Kent’s mum said “ Why don’t you go and tell Zacs mum that if he is allowed to come with” “Okey” said Kent. So he went to Zac's house.

Then Kent went over at Zacs he knocked on the door and Zac’s mum open the door and invited him for some cookies and a cup of tea.When Kent came in Zac came down stairs and high fived Kent. When Zac came down stairs he went to get a cookie and went back upstairs into his room.

Later that Kent asked Zac’s mum if Zac was allowed to come with him for an adventure to Tanuki cave. Then Zac came down and said “ Mum do you know where I put my shoes” but she did not answer she was too busy talking to Kent.

Then Kent asked Zac if he wanted to come Tanuki cave with him. Zac said “YES”.Then Kent went back home to go pack and Zac went upstairs to pack as well.When Kent got back home his mum already did his packing for him.

Later that hour Zac just finished and said “Buy to his mum” so he went to Kent’s mum’s car and went at the back with him.When they got their was in front of the cave inside it looked slimy so Kent’s mum said “Have a good day and see you later”.

So where should we start the fire over their said Kent. But then they heard a noise a loud they said that it was a slim monster in there.So they got the torch and aimed it to the cave what they saw was bones and heaps and heaps of slime.

The next day Kent was the only one sleeping on the ground because Zac went into the cave to check it out when he took one step Kent his hand and Zac and Kent fell over.

Walt: write a narrative
Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing (for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling).

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