Wednesday 22 August 2018

Delicious Descriptions



This term I have have just finished my writing activity for week 1, term 3. This term we have been learning about essay writing and how to improve our writing to make it more sense and better writing. Here is a presentation about my writing of how I can improve on to make my writing more perfect. Hope you enjoy my writing activity for 2018. Enjoy!!!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jasmyne, Oliver here from T3 here. I just wanted to say that this video you posted was really interesting and informative. I learnt so much from it that i didn't know!
    Thanks for the awesome post. Yours sincerely, Oliver.

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  2. Hi Jasmyne, Oliver here from T3 here. I just wanted to say that this video you posted was really interesting and informative. I learnt so much from it that i didn't know!
    Thanks for the awesome post. Yours sincerely, Oliver.

    ReplyDelete